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dear wolfcub

very sorry for breaking it to you, but seriously, if you're 22, you should see that what you're drawing right now is downright crappy. the lineart is shoddy, there's corners and extra joints everywhere, it is very obvious that you do not use reference in the slightest, looking at the lack of anatomy in your drawings, your flat colours are decent enough, but when you shade it ends up looking dreadful. The colours are too dead-looking, too extreme, blocky, it just looks flat, there's no depth, and even when you do highlights, it's just TOO light. Nothing is pure white, even with the sun on it. While there are parts that can look good as pure white, they'd have to be small spaces, like a single, small shine on a cheek or a shoulder, or some small sparkles of light reflected by really shiny hair. Speaking of hair, the way you do hair, and for that matter fut, just doesn't look real at all. The way you color, you color the flats, and then add lines of a somewhat darker, or an entirely different color. I'm not sure if you've noticed, but even with only one eye, it should be obvious that hairdoesn't work that way.

but seriously! your work is not. good! When I come accross your page I feel like slamming my head against a wall for multiple reasons:
- you get way too much attention
- your art sucks
- your spelling maybe even worse!
What the hell happened to commas and periods, capitalising, or decent use of language? using dude once in a while is allowed but please. PLEASE realise that there are people out there that DON'T like reading a sentence starting with a lower case letter, without any commas or periods, with misspelled words all over the place and ending with calling me a dude. I"m not a dude. half of the world isn't, and the greater part of the other half won't even like it when you're called a "dude".

Seriously, I BEG youto make some progress. OBSERVE how things WORK. Do studies, practice parts at a time, just WORK ON BECOMING BETTER. If people tell you your work looks great, take it with a grain, nay a BUCKET of salt. Compare with other people, compare with your friends.

it looks like your drawings are traced from a decent looking drawing, but from the hand of a four year old. SOMETHING in there suggests that you know something of anatomy, but the way you draw now just makes me think your array of skills is looking at other people's drawings, thinking "this looks good", and copying tricks from that person.
but badly.

Remember that being an artist means ALWAYS wanting, needing to improve your skills.

you at one point were really disappointed you didn't get into art college, and I think you even thought you had a chance. I'm at this very moment trying to do the same, and I'm sweating myself to death from nervousness. I am DEFINITELY not thinking I'm good enough for the course, and my work is not NEARLY as bad as yours.

Furthermore, I cannot begin to express my hatred for people who think they're better than they are. This is why I love johnsu and tracy j butler so much, they keep their modesty even though they're amazing at what they do and deserve the praise they get. You however, gain more attention in one week than I've gotten in my entire three years on dA.

This may be because you spam everyone to death with your "art" and they can't do anything but come accross your work when browsing, but seriously!

thank you sincerely for reading this, I think you deserve a cookie now.

have a good day.


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Aug. 15th, 2009 07:04 pm (UTC)
What is up with this person? What the fuck?Going so far as to criticize your use of the word 'dude'? Uh, hello, lots of people use it, myself included. That person has some major issues. And I really hope that you know it's their problem, not yours.
Haha they're just jealous that you get more attention than them. I srsly think that's what this whole thing comes down to. Bitches.
Aug. 15th, 2009 10:36 pm (UTC)
I totally agree with Kelly, the person is blatantly jealous of your number of pageviews and your number of watchers.

If they spent less time bitching and more time spreading some love around the community they'd have their bloody pageviews >___>

Ignore them buddy <3
Aug. 17th, 2009 06:21 pm (UTC)
" I'm not sure if you've noticed, but even with only one eye, it should be obvious that haird oesn't work that way."

That....was seriously uncalled for :/
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